Love the atmosphere and complexity of your writing. I can see the tall girl and the woman she visits. In my minds eye it is a bit dusty there. I would love to see this as a movie. I’m so curious to learn more about expees! Wonderful writing!
Your atomic chapters are good reading, but it's a real treat to see how wonderful you are without word counts! The solarpunk-soft space western undercurrent I gather from your writing rings true here, with a shade of Valhalla? Excellent stuff. I'm ready to buy the novel for more of this.
A Rest Stop In A Long Valley
Love the atmosphere and complexity of your writing. I can see the tall girl and the woman she visits. In my minds eye it is a bit dusty there. I would love to see this as a movie. I’m so curious to learn more about expees! Wonderful writing!
Such a well created world Edward. Really enjoyed this one!
This is a promising piece of writing, I enjoyed it and want to read more. Thank you!
So great at creating vivid scenes!
Your atomic chapters are good reading, but it's a real treat to see how wonderful you are without word counts! The solarpunk-soft space western undercurrent I gather from your writing rings true here, with a shade of Valhalla? Excellent stuff. I'm ready to buy the novel for more of this.