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Love the atmosphere and complexity of your writing. I can see the tall girl and the woman she visits. In my minds eye it is a bit dusty there. I would love to see this as a movie. I’m so curious to learn more about expees! Wonderful writing!

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Thank you so much, I know what you mean, that's how I write, as if I can see chapters as scenes. You're right about the dust, it's in my mind which I reference in one line.

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Apr 3, 2023Liked by Edward Rooster

Such a well created world Edward. Really enjoyed this one!

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Thank you kindly, AJ, I appreciate it very much! I look forward to delivering the full book this chapter is a part of soon.

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This is a promising piece of writing, I enjoyed it and want to read more. Thank you!

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Thanks Stephanie, I appreciate that very much! (This story is a long overdue "chapter", that I wanted to write, for the "Book #1" , "Box Of Stars", written during 2021, being edited this year.

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Apr 2, 2023Liked by Edward Rooster

So great at creating vivid scenes!

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Mar 27, 2023Liked by Edward Rooster

Your atomic chapters are good reading, but it's a real treat to see how wonderful you are without word counts! The solarpunk-soft space western undercurrent I gather from your writing rings true here, with a shade of Valhalla? Excellent stuff. I'm ready to buy the novel for more of this.

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Thanks so much for reading this chapter, David, I love your description of it. It's fun to rewrite/edit the work and unpack what was in my mind for each chapter and scene.

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