Edward, ooooh, your walk through the park reads like a cinematic ode to the unnoticed.
The silhouettes of trees and the scooter sprite feel like characters in a world you’re both exploring and building, weaving Nolan’s narratives into your own quiet epiphanies.
And your reflections on time! how it shapes families, memories, and leaves underfoot? That remind me of the way autumn holds a mirror to change, steady yet startling.
I love how you’ve gifted yourself the same breath of rediscovery you gave your character. it feels like you’re honoring the process, not just the product
This draft hums with life, and if it’s unfinished, then so is the world it walks through.
Edward, ooooh, your walk through the park reads like a cinematic ode to the unnoticed.
The silhouettes of trees and the scooter sprite feel like characters in a world you’re both exploring and building, weaving Nolan’s narratives into your own quiet epiphanies.
And your reflections on time! how it shapes families, memories, and leaves underfoot? That remind me of the way autumn holds a mirror to change, steady yet startling.
I love how you’ve gifted yourself the same breath of rediscovery you gave your character. it feels like you’re honoring the process, not just the product
This draft hums with life, and if it’s unfinished, then so is the world it walks through.
Thank you kindly, for making time to read it and the very kind response, I am honored.
Take Five is a great song. One of my favorites. I can see it being a sauntering song. Enjoyed this.
Yes, it's a great song in a wonderful album.